rate_review Reviews

Awww! I feel so bad for Xander! He is having so much trouble dealing with the fact that he is attracted to a man...and...that man is Spike. And all Spike does is make it completely worse....I know, that's how Spike is. But, I can't wait until the point where Spike gets over himself and stops chasing after Buffy and goes for Xander. It would be awesome if Xander gets all upset because Spike acts like he doesn't want him, and then, just when things seem so terrible for Xander, Spike gets over Buffy or whoever he is hung up on, and goes after Xander. But, it's your story and I'm not gonig to tell you how to write it...just an idea. Hehe.
Anyways, I hope these two can figure things out and why they can't leave Xander's apartment...that's kinda freaky.
Please post lots more! I want to know what happens next!

Hurryuphurryuphurryuphurryuphurryuphurryuphurryuphurryuphurryuphurryup with the next chapter.

I really like this and would love to read more! Keep up the good work!

The traitorous body parts will get you every time. Great job. Keep it up and more soon please.

this is darling, keep going ,love spike and zander storys thankyou

great start, i love it already.the last lines of chap. two were just classic.

Very cute so far. Typical of Spike to be a jerk. A couple little spots you goofed, but that's not to bad. At the begining of the story you mention that Xander has one eye. In the third chapter you have him with two eyes a couple of times.