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muahahaha!!!! love it!!! more pleeeeease, xanders point of view??*puppy-dog eyes*

Awwww! I totally loved this chapter! I couldn't stop smiling the entire time I was reading it. Lol. Spike was too cute. I love a jealous Spike. It's too bad that Xander was drunk for most of it though. Like the kiss and the dance. Plus, it would have been good if Xander wasn't drunk when Spike apologized.
I love the Xander teddy bear idea, that is adorable. I can't wait to see how Xander is going to react when he wakes up in the morning. It was good that he refused to go into the bedroom but now he's going to wake up hung over and not knowing where he is at first. That should be pretty funny.
Great work, and post lots more now please!

It is awesome so far. Please continue.
~Elaine

Lol, awesome story. More soon?

Okay, I gotta say that I like this chapter a lot better than the last but it was WAY too bloody short! I need longer updates!!!! Pretty please?
Cheers to having a jealous Spike. He always gets so possesive when he's jealous, it should be interesting to see what he does with this situation. Hopefully he doesn't make too much of a fool of himself or piss Xander off too much. But I still don't think that Spike has had enough payback for what he did to Xander. What Spike did was just plain mean....need more angst on his end. I hope that Xander at least gets to have some fun at the club before things get complicated.
And when are we going to see Buffy again? Not that I want her coming between the boys but she seems to be the big, fat, and purple elephant that silently sits between these two. That particular avenue needs to be explored until we find some answers.
I absolutely love you for updating fairly regularly instead of making me wait, ane wait, and wait. Keep up the awesome story! More now please!

Love all of the emotional indecision and confusion, then there's all of that angst and loads of smut - magic, love the way that you are building this fic.

Writhe, Spike, writhe. Then just when you're totally confused, Buffy can tell you where to stick it.

Angst, jealous Spike and awesome writing I'm ok with that:D loved the new chapter and how Xander unknowingly reverses their situation with Spike being the craving jealous one all of a sudden

I'm not really sure what happened, I really liked the story and now... I don't. Not your fault really I guess, ya just kinda made me think spike was an asshole. and made him sickeningly dominant. ah well.

i'm loving this. poor xander. is spike gonna find out about buffy? update again soon. ^_^