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person TheShadowCat
schedule October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
There better be smut in at least one of those chapters. I have a feeling that it won't be in the next chapter because of that phone call. Please hurry with the next chapter.
person Alice
schedule October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*passes out* So close! Why the torment! MAS MAS MAS! Hurry!
person Anon
schedule October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love it verry cute and sweet and jelous spike is yummy always. question is this the end for this story or do u plan to go on like the /20 implies? if so good luck and please update soon. oh and macho man oh my lol
person hh007
schedule October 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Poor misunderstood Spikey..come here I'll make it all better.

I can't wait for all the miscomunication to end! Great story!
person Elaineth
schedule October 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hello. This fic is Awesome. You can tell because I'm actually sending a review. Please update as soon as you can.
~Elaine
person Selene
schedule October 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ahhHHHH!!!!!! NOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!! more xander!!!!
person TheShadowCat
schedule October 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ok, they've done the kissing, now lets get on with the making up part. You know, the part that requires no clothing and lots of sweating.
person Anon
schedule October 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh no stupid Xander *frantically looking for duck tape to cover his mouth* Please let Spike be able to seduce Xander
person Christine
schedule October 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You know what? I really, really like this story but for some reason this chapter just pissed me off. I can't believe all the shit that Spike is putting Xander through. Can't he just stop making up stupid plans and lying to Xander? I mean, he's dealing with the most insecure person that ever existed in the world of Buffy and he thinks that silly plans are going to convince Xander that he's in love with him? Ugh! He just needs to be sincere for once, then maybe Xander will believe him.
Sorry for ranting, but I was just ticked at Spike's behaviour. But I'm really happy for the updates! That's awesome that this story is moving along quite nicely and I cannot wait to see what happens next.
person TheShadowCat
schedule October 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You are not sorry for that cliff hanger. You know you enjoyed writing it to torture you readers. So get on with the update and hurry it up already. I can't wait to see how Spike explains his actions to Xan.