AFF Fiction Portal
schedule March 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
awwwww! that was such a cute story! poor helpless spike and poor frustrated xander. and all the angst and jealousy and it was just perfectly done. great work!
person iamlynn
schedule April 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great story - would love to see a sequel!
person stasa
schedule April 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful! Enjoyed reading it so very much?:D
person Windssong
schedule October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
eww yummy i loved it and you ended it lovely. i gotta say i love the last chapter good work!
person TheShadowCat
schedule October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very nice story. Sorry to see that it's over.
person TheShadowCat
schedule October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Bloody tease. Hurry with the next chapter already.

ps-you gave Xander 2 eyes again.
person Anon
schedule October 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ack ahh err. i dont know wiether to be horribly mad at you for snatching it away once it was so close or pleased that u wrote it so well. please udate soon and please make it better!
person selene
schedule October 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*cries!!!!* nooooo!!!! want more!!!!!
person TheShadowCat
schedule October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Of course I saw the foreshadowing. God knows I write enough of it myself. At any rate, hurry up with the next chapter.
person jen
schedule October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
After chapter 15 everything seemed so happy endy that I wondered what you were gonna wright about in the remaining five chapters.. now I'm wondering how you will be able to bring this story to an end in only 3 chapters. Love the twist