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I just like to mention that i normaly was reading this Story an fanfiction.net but there is the ending of chapter 4 b (5) missing. I am very happy that the ending is here, but it would be good for other readers to update the ending on fanfiction.

More please, much more ! This were beautiful chapters and i like to read more. Thanks for writing

Jost read the series so far and enjoyed it quite a bit. You are a good writer and I am looking forward to more. You have also written the other ages/realities very well. Two critiques though: 1) It drives me crazy in stories like this when authors try to givr the characters the same name all the time - it really doesn't seem realistic and is unneccessary, we will recognize them, and 2) there were no people 'millions of years ago' and especially with language that sophisticated. Other than that, as I said looking forward to more.

Dude! I totally loved the latest update! It was soo perfect. It had the right blend of everything that I was looking for to finish that story. Hehe,totally awesome.
And you're going to make me wait until December or January for more? Are you crazy? I want lots more now! I want to see if Xander and Spike will get together in the present story line! Please post some more sometime soon....not months later!!

nooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *cries* need more!!!!

Why that lying little bastard, Spike playing Xander like that is just plain mean.lolI know Xander needs to come around but does Spike need to do it queit like that? I truly truly love this story, you have come up with an original storyline an dyou make it work so perfectly keep up the amazing work~Beth

People have recently told me that I should not give feedback if its mean, because it makes the authors sad. But I say if a writer demands feedback then they can't get mad if I tell them that their writing sucks or they have no plot. But I won't have those problems with this fic. Why? Cause its fucking fabulous! Your collection of stories are well written, they draw the reader in and you have just enough Smut to keep the slasher in me happy and enough story line to make it more than just PWP (porn w/ plot), cause sometimes a girl needs more. Some of your chapters are angsty, some funny, one even has a BDSM theme which is my secret vice. You've made what could have been a bunch of good ficlets into a great story. I especially love the last one. The authors you are working with consistently write good fic and only make you shine. I'm seeing a fic awards in your future. Keep up the good work. Can't wait til the next chapter.

OMG! I just left a comment on FF.net for more of this story and I come here and find another chapter. I love this series and I'm SOOO glad to see another chapter. More soon pwease.

Shay

MMM yummy fic. Glad to see this Xander isn't giving in without a fight. I need part B and I need it bad.

Hey, I really like this series cause I love Xander and Spike together. This edition of the series is really interesting. What kind of powers does Xander have? I know you said that he's psychic but he hasn't been able to use them yet. I liked this update but one thing I don't like is how forceful Spike is being with Xander. I feel sorry for Xander because people are just forcing situations on him and not explaining anything at all to him. And it seems as if Spike is just using him for sex. So far, I liked the other stories better, there was much more feeling between the two of them. But I really want to see the next part to see what happens next. Maybe someone will finally listen to Xander and what he wants. Or just explain things to him so that he isn't being pushed around so much and having people laugh at him. I also want to see what happens with him having powers and if that comes into play at all.
Update right now please!