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for White Knight's War

by pixel2817

person R
schedule November 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Only had time to read the first 3 chapters but so far its really good.
person Newtype
schedule October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good part you put up, but it leaves me with more q then a. Please do post more I like reading this stroy its a good idea
person gact
schedule October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, awesome idea, I can't wait to read more.
person LitGal
schedule October 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a wonderfully plotted story. I like that you really have a unique set up going here. I want to find out what happened to turn Buffy and see if she can be saved. I want to know what trials Xander undertook and how they affected him. I definitely want to see Angel and Xander and Spike interact now that things are so different.
person Newtype
schedule October 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The idea is good, don't get me wrong but I had ahard time fallowing along, tomuch infomration downloaded all at once time, can we learn it as we go? By the way write more please, dispite getting lost I enjoyed reading it.