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You should have killen Willow she is yust an manipulating hwore

I am utterly entralled! This is the most intriguing story I've read in quite a long while! keep that shit up son! Much love from bizzert

hold up. If Ford's a vampire, they didn't invite him in.

hey do u have any webpage where i can download your fic mirror?
it's not loading properly on aff.net
really wanna read it..
please help

Just finished and I wanted to tell you how much I enjoyed it! Not a fan of the threeway thing,but your ending was sweet and kind of open-ended. The situation you created was a tough one,and I must say I don't know who I would pick to be together. I've read your stuff before,and I'm always happy when I see your name attached to something. Thanks for a great story,any plans to continue?

Very interesting story. I haven't visited this site in a while, because most of the stuff here is crap, or written about subjects out of my range of interest. This is a well done storyline, and good writing. A bit uneven in spots, but I attribute that to your not using a beta reader. Very nice job-I'll be back for more! Booyahs! ~Vin

Hah, finally! Wow, wow and more wow! I simply love the way you write the girls - they seem totally in character. Also love the way you take your time to put down all the emotions and thoughts they have to deal with - reminds me a lot of chimerablooms writing (one of the 3 authors on my best ever list). I think I know where you're going with this story and I'm just about to say "Hah, I knew it! I saw it coming, I told you so!". You really try hard to make the happily-after-all threesome of Faith/Buffy/Willow as logical and believable as possible, still, I have mixed emotions about it. Maybe it's just me, but a menage a trois as the solution to an emotionally very complicated situation does seem a little... well... like fiction, not like something that would happen in real-life. Which, I know, is an absurd point to bring up, considering that a.) this IS fiction and b.) all the characters are fictional as well. And after all, it might just be me, who knows? I don't know, it's kinda hard for me to put my thoughts into the right words... I'm the first one to admit that I always have (and probably always will) love femslash pairings. And femslash pairings with a kinky BDSM background and dominance/submission themes - hey, it doesn't get any better than that! But in this specific case... I don't know... I just doesn't strike me as the right solution. It feels more as if you're taking an easy way out of it - 'cause it will be easier to simply put the three of them together and let them play/live some Mistress/Slave relationships to deal with their bottled up emotions and bad consciences, than to actually decide who will end up together and make that choice believable to the readers. Then again, it's your story... And the fact that you've made me put so much thought into this story (even though I'm only a reader and not the author!) is proof enough of what a utterly amazing job you did in writing this story and the characters in it. Really a terrific piece of writing - hopefully we won't have to wait too long for the next update!?

Ok, chapter 14 and counting - time for a little in-between-review. So far - unbelievably great piece of fiction! You got me seriously fooled on at least three different occasions and suprised a couple other times! Spike turning Buffy, Buffy dusting Spike, her relatively early capture, the whole schizophrenic no-soul thing, the Buffy & Faith, no hang on, Faith & Will, no, scrap that, it's back to B & F, but wait: evil B is obsessed with Faithy and Faith & Will DO find each other, Buffy not coming back but going to Cleveland... I'm kinda proud though, that I did figure out as soon as I read that Will's got a grandmother nearby Cleveland, that it would have to be Rose, alas leading to a very surprising reunion of B and Red. Then Vamps start showing up in Cleveland, Giles (not) telling Faith that she's about to be reassigned... wait: hasn't there been mention of a second Hellmouth in Cleveland in an episode on TV...? Hmmm... I wonder where Faith will be sent to... :-) Anyway, this is a terrific piece of writing, by far one of the best I've ever read. If you keep up the quality of suspense, drama, emotional turmoil and style of writing, this story will easily crack my personal "Best 3 fictions ever" list (not that you would care, I assume...). To sum things up, I really look forward to all the emotional drama that I'm pretty sure is about to unfold in Cleveland. Lucky me you just added three more chapters, thus ensuring me that this story is far from over - yeeh-ha!!!

What I like about this one is that you keep Buffy, Faith and Co. in character. Too many entries in the Buffy category do not have anything in common with the show except for a few names. They use a generic template that could fit pretty much any book, movie or TV show and they just name their protagonists ?Buffy? and ?Spike?, even though the characters in their stories do not even remotely resemble their counterparts from the TV series. By contrast, your story often feels like something that might have happened on the actual show.

I'm a few parts behind but since you asked so nicely a while back I thought I'd review. I really like your stuff, and have read quite a lot of it, but as I think I've said in a review before I believe there are reasons beyond the level of writing/storytelling that leads to the limited number of hits/responses you get - your fics are huge! It's ultimately rewarding, but it really requires an investment to read your fics because of their length (and hence the amount of time needed to follow them.

Maybe you'd get more hits/reviews if you posted in smaller chunks?

Anyway, I'm enjoying it, so keep up the good work.

Oh and I hope you don't mind me pointing you there, but 'http://www.earlygirl.com/sincerely.shtml' is a really useful and readable article about getting things like usage of you're/your and there/there/they're right. Your stuff generally seems pretty well proofed but errors with those words show up from time to time.