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person LitGal
schedule September 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice start... I'd really like to see where this one is going.
person delmi
schedule September 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Loved this chapter, this story seems very promising. Looking forward to more.
person Anon
schedule September 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
more chapters soon please
person gundam06serenity (too lazy to log in)
schedule September 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
...hallerious. brilliant. update!
person Tisienne
schedule September 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, now this is interesting!

Can't wait to see how you're going to get to the inevitable conclusion-- meaning Spike and Xander together! LOL

VERY nicely done so far; nice shift from canon.

Waiting as patiently as I can for the next part... and the part after that... and the one after, and so on and so on and so on...

And I'm stopping now, before I become an old Faberge commercial. LOL

~Tis
person TheShadowCat
schedule September 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Now this does look to be a very promising story. Just watch your spelling and you're good.