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April 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This story is amazing! From the beginning confusion and mix up between Spike/Will and Xander/Alex, them finding each other and the constant fucking, Angel driving himself up the wall with want, to the happy ending between Fran and Rupert. It's perfection.
There were so many emotions, and so much real and desperate want and need. The way you wrote it sucked me right in and refused to let go. You made me feel the yearning. And the sex scenes were mind blowing. I have no idea how you managed to write so many of them and still keep them fresh and versatile.
And I love how you came up with the new plot twists (it started with the mix up, but after that was cleared up, you brought in the sex and Angel - that was fun x) and then came Fran and Dawn and the way Xander didn't scar) and tied them in with the story so that they didn't seem like you made them up on the spot just because you needed a new direction to the story. And you never forgot the past the characters share.
That being said, I also love the way you portrayed the characters. I loved Xander. He was so strong and sure of himself and still loving. And Hyulet was great too. It was awesome the way they spoke to each other, with only words and simple terms (like Spike being "ours" and others being cubs or pack or something). And Spike being so possessive and at the same time both submissive and equal. It all was so complex and so damn beautiful.
I love this story. And the way you write. I hope you never stop writing!
There were so many emotions, and so much real and desperate want and need. The way you wrote it sucked me right in and refused to let go. You made me feel the yearning. And the sex scenes were mind blowing. I have no idea how you managed to write so many of them and still keep them fresh and versatile.
And I love how you came up with the new plot twists (it started with the mix up, but after that was cleared up, you brought in the sex and Angel - that was fun x) and then came Fran and Dawn and the way Xander didn't scar) and tied them in with the story so that they didn't seem like you made them up on the spot just because you needed a new direction to the story. And you never forgot the past the characters share.
That being said, I also love the way you portrayed the characters. I loved Xander. He was so strong and sure of himself and still loving. And Hyulet was great too. It was awesome the way they spoke to each other, with only words and simple terms (like Spike being "ours" and others being cubs or pack or something). And Spike being so possessive and at the same time both submissive and equal. It all was so complex and so damn beautiful.
I love this story. And the way you write. I hope you never stop writing!
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August 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was just awesome. Hot steamy and with great plot to boot. Cant wait to read what else you've got!!
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March 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
gah, you're back :))) so good to see you around once again XDD
and now I'll be a good reader, and see what you posted in 2007:>
and now I'll be a good reader, and see what you posted in 2007:>
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January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, my two favorite stories updated within the past 24 hours. Wow, I must be doing something right to get the update gods to like me again. Great chapter, can't wait to see what happens next, so please update soon.
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January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Loved it as always.
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January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, I love this. Keep up the good work. I haven`t read anything this good, since Gentry Green and that is a whole other genre, series, whatever.
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January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sweet! You really do update fast and you thank the reviewers. COOL! This update was more plot but that's what keeps it interesting. :) That's pretty funny how they need to make the sound wards stronger in order to not hear spike and xander going at it. Update soon but you already do that.
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January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay! if anyone can stop whatever idiocy Angel's got planned, it's Dawn and Fran. Grinning and bouncing as I wait for more.
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January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Just keeps getting better!
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January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ACK! I like Fran. Don't kill off Fran please. She needs to be the next young Slayer to drive Giles buggy. And maybe he can drive a few other things, but that's another story/chapter. Update soon please.