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for When the Day Breaks

by addielogan

person nat
schedule September 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm with Buffy on the Emma hating, sorry. Spike is a fool for going to her after "words" with Buffy. The woman's pregnant for goodness sake!! Spike needs to cut her some slack and pander to her raging hormones - he is suppose to love Buffy isn't he? His behaviour is very un-Spike-like.
person Penny
schedule September 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It sounds more like Buffy doesn't trust Emma not that she doesn't trust Spike. Buffy's voiced her concerns and dislikes over Emma. Spike avoids all non-Buffy-shaped slayers like the plague. So then why would he care so much over Emma and how Emma feels? He is deciding to befriend the one person Buffy has a problem with. I don't believe he is attracted to her or plans to cheat on Buffy, but what possible explanation could he have for not caring about Buffy's feelings when it came to Emma and to defend Emma and then get so angry at Buffy? Is he trying to hurt Buffy on purpose or can he really be that heartless? Going to her room to check on her and then sparring with Emma was a slap in the face to Buffy. Period. (not saying that Buffy is rational) I guess I thought Spike loved Buffy more than that. Sorry. rant over. Looking forward to more chapters to shed light on their behavior.
person wolfspider
schedule September 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*rolls eyes* they have been through and apocolypse and she thinks he is after Emma. Oh for good gods hormones or not she is being a total dorkface. Anyways I like Emma,her character has depth. Spike is trying to help and be a nice trainer. Evil cliffhanger woman LOL.
person slayerspet
schedule September 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow...it really has to be the hormones making Buffy act that way. Please update soon.
person the_lifted_lorax
schedule September 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, it's so frustrating! Just when they had everything figured out, Buffy has to go and be stupid. Grrrr.

Also, Malcolm McLaren managed the Sex Pistols, but I'm not positive what she's talking about there.
person spikestheman
schedule September 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey Addie....love this fic so far and sorry but I am all on board with Buffy here...Spike knew that sparring with Emma was the wrong thing...I know Buffy is being silly but having had three chidren myself I can totally relate to the crazy hormones and ridiculous mood swings. He should have just apologised to Emma and left it at that...I think deep down he is a little attracted to her...she reminds him of Buffy years before...just promise me Addie that you will update soon and put me out of my misery...:)
person Coquine
schedule September 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nope! Far from disappointing. And getting to the Spuffy lovin' by chapter two is always a plus!
person maia
schedule September 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
can't promise to review everytime but i will try as much as I can...anyway great chapter! almost everything seems to go well (except Buffy's moods) and I amm just wondering when the other shoe will drop...
person MarzBar
schedule September 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Who is our new slayer? Is she bringing the newest disaster or is she helping to fight it? More please.
person ace
schedule September 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Glad to see another chapter. Hormonal Buffy will be interesting...