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for When the Day Breaks

by addielogan

person slayerspet
schedule September 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad Buffy apologized...Cant wait for another update.
person spikestheman
schedule September 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well that was a bit anti-climactic...thought we were going to string this along for a few chapters at least...however always nice to see happy Spuffy, and darnit.....evil cliffhanger:)
person the_lifted_lorax
schedule September 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh where, oh where have our heroes gone? Oh where, oh where can they be?

Loved it - especially the way Emma acted when Buffy walked in. I wonder what happened in her past to make her so sad - I feel connected to her already, and I want her to be happy!
person vsnj
schedule September 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm really enjoying this story. I side with both Buffy and Spike. I understand Buffy's issues with jealousy and hormones. I understand Spike not wanting to be treated like shit by Buffy again. This is a true fight between two people who love each other. They were both at falt and are forgiving each other. Thanks for sharing.
person MarzBar
schedule September 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So, no death threats? Have they all been demon-zapped somewhere together where they will have to get along to survive? Which one(s) of them does the zapper want and for what purpose? More soon please.
person wolfspider
schedule September 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh thank the gods that Buffy came to her damn senses...I loved spike saying "need to call hell to see if they need skis" OMG OMG LMAO that was beautiful. Great chapter. I believe Emma has some serious issues going on and well needs to find a good slayer therapist to help her out with them. loved this chapter. Your Dawn is so on, I mean she would totally tell Buffy like it was and not hold back. EXCELLENT!!!!!!!! NOW what is that evil cliffhanger, UGHHHHHHHHHHHHH 20 million lashings with a wet Spike for you LOL
person maia
schedule September 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
huh? need to know where you want to go with this...good to know it's better between the heroes for now, but what a cliffhanger! again a good chapter!
person jane
schedule September 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Silly silly boy I could see that coming a mile away> Update soon can@t wait to see what happens next>
person MarzBar
schedule September 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oy! Spike has been fabulously stupid and Buffy is being fabulously bitchy. I hope Emma will be worth it. More soon please.
person Unholydragoon
schedule September 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Pure Evil, is what ye are. Since ye have such a stellar track record for making the angst worth it, This is getting a might bit TOO interesting. Well played.