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for When the Day Breaks

by addielogan

person MarzBar
schedule October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I see we've arrived at the appocalypse. I hope tall, dark and gorgeous will be good for the cause and maybe for Emma, too? More soon please.
person Brunettepet
schedule October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dawn's little comment on Angel and Buffy having duelling annual apocalyptic battles was amusing, but Spike's comments that Buffy just needs to throw a couple of her fights made me laugh out loud. The cameraderie between Emma and Dawn is fun to read, and Spike and Buffy's relationship is well grounded when she's not giving in to the hormones..
person Wicked
schedule October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love the new twist. Can't wait to see where this goes
person wolfspider
schedule October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well shit if Dawn and Emma won't take tall dark and gorgeous then I am willing to take one for the team here LOL. That was an awesome chapter. I hope what Aiden said is so, that they key can't be hurt, though he did not say anything about it not being so in human form. Won't he just shit when he finds who Dawn is. Though the storms are raging in the demon demension I feel that the this is just calm before the big storm hits. KEEP this going, I insist, and I beg you to write more like now :-P
person VSNJ
schedule October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really love this story. I feel that given time Buffy and Spike could be the best couple ever because nothing with them is perfect. So they make it their perfect.
Great Chapter
person wolfspider
schedule October 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WHOAAAaaaaaaaaaaa major tornado twister there. love it. I still want the tall dark blue eyed demon guy though. *grins*. Excellent story and chapter keep it coming
person maia
schedule October 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh my..! what a turn! can't wait for the action ;)
person Wicked
schedule October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great stuff. Glad Buffy stopped being all super-bitch, but honestly? I'm gunna be waiting for it all to start up again. -lol- curious as to where they went. and why.
person redwulf50
schedule September 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very good fic so far glad I found it :P
person Mole
schedule September 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi! Great, you're back with the sequel. Sorry, but I've just caught up. I liked 'Daylight' very much and this one is really promising although Buffy still can't let her inner bitch just shut up. Well, I'll read it anyway, so update soon!!!