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for When the Day Breaks

by addielogan

person Anon
schedule December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i looooooove spuffy baby fics. so your definitely gonna have to update this soon!
person MarzBar
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for coming back to this one. I like your Emma and hope her new friend turns out to be everybody's friend. Got to love the lickable muscles. More story please.
person wolfspider
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OH OH OH OH so glad to see this updated...not complaining at all about that other loud plot bunny LOL. I want to be Emma, Aiden sounds deliscious and lickable muscles YUMMY. Gods I hope that Buffy is careful and does nothing stupid to harm her or the baby. Spike is such a dad already. I mean he watches out for these girls. Thanks for the update. But if that other plot bunny is screaming don't ignore LOL
person Dane DeFryske
schedule October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another good one. Can't wait till you update again.
person slayerspet
schedule October 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Keep going ...need to know what else happens. Oh yea...and good love scene.
person Wicked
schedule October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Loved the new chappie. Had a feeling something would start working its mojo between Aiden and Emma. Can't wait to see where that one goes. hehe. Glad Buffy's definitely over her jealousy issues. Good timing since its just the 4 in an alternate dimension, too. -lol-
person jane
schedule October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Really enjoyed those last two chapters. Interesting new setting and character. Can't wait to read more.
person Richard
schedule October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is sweet, in a really screwed up way. :) I especially like Emma. I think that every fan learns to like OCs after they've read a few hundred BTVS stories, only the new ones don't.
person Richard
schedule October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Huh, I thought the story was going to be about Spike and Buffy dealing with their issues. Action took me completely by surprise. :)
person ms marple
schedule October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I so love your storys, I always looking forward to the next chapter. Please, please keep on writing.