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OK so I LOVE your work. I have read every single one of your prices on here and I like them all. When I have time I'm going to go back and give a very detailed review....cause that's basically my way of praising your work, pointing out the few mistakes, the more I find the more you know I love it :). But this one has me in more knots then I know what to do with.in love it a lot, but I'm not sure about the whole completely killing xander soul thing, can't you find a way to bring it back and it not be a curse. In the Halloween one he is a fuckin bad ass who couldn't give to shits about a random stranger but still had a soul and was still him, just....a little evil. (And I have only gotten to chapter 5 of the second have of that cause your site isn't working for me :( so I don't know how that ended but hopefully not with him being turned cause that would, in my opinion change everything I like about him). So basically I loved the whole its still xander but now he can eat people thing, but its not xander cause what made him him was not just his humanity but his kindness and his soul. So the end when angel hoped his soul found peace I found my self hating the vamp a lot, which I don't like cause I love how you made xander come across. I don't like the think that xander is dead and this is a demon that is kinda human and acts like xander cause of the memories. So if you plan to make a second one I really hope you either make me fall in love with the demon xander to the point I don't hate that he is not really him, or you bring back xander without it being a curse (I honestly would make it so he was there the whole time just repressed but still pressing his humanity into the demon, and some spell or trinket wakes him up complely), and there is a lot you could do with the government now bring angel contracts (make your own version of the hellboy project) and don't get me started on how I really want to see every in sunnydales reactions to all of this. Yep, I am really looking forward to a sequel. Maybe even a moment where spike and xander fight to settle the score once and for all. Since they can fight with xander being a demon. And another thing that has nothing to do with this story but with you in general. Can you try your hand at a xander X oz? Or xander with hyena demon in him and human soul too? Cause a xander listening to animal instincts could lead to a lot of possibilities ;). So ya, that's all I have for now, if you could please email me when you update any of your work, or when your site is working again, thanks.

update, please?

Wow! Great story as usual, but wouldn't have minded a bit more detail during the bedroom scene.

I loved this. You write a great Xander.

awww, poor xand and cordy!!! more please?

Awwww! This chapter was sooo sad! I can't believe that Xander is thinking of killing himself! What a twit! I'm glad that he and Angel are gonig to talk, Angel needs to let Xander in on what went down on his "kill mission". And poor Cordelia. I hope that Angel and Xander come to some sort of an agreement or that something is figured out. Just don't kill Xander!
Please post lots right now! I need to know what's gonna happen next!

And yet another great chapter. How do you do it? At any rate, keep it up and update soon please.

OH, this rocks! I like it, more please!

Excellent chapters! Wow, more please? Mr Perceptive really made Angel look at himself huh? I wonder if there's a chance for Xander to get his soul back too? I just wanna go to Sunnyhell and beat the living daylights outta his so called friends..Jesus, if they really cared about him that much they never would have treated him like that, they woulda tried to help any way they could, and they have to know the soul restoration spell, don't they??

ACK! need more, I love this story, and I like that Xander is still all Xandery. Full of Xandery goodness. I Like this very much!