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September 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a great plot line, Joyce the slayer with a daughter, interesting premise. I cant wait for the next chapter. Really shocked me. Well done
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September 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am waiting to see where its going but I like it
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September 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm having the same problem with lazy readers on my fics :)
I do hope you decide to keep going with this one though, I'm enjoying the novel plot concept of *Joyce* being a slayer (the mind boggles).
And watching confrontations between this Buffy and Spike is going to be *very* interesting.
I do hope you decide to keep going with this one though, I'm enjoying the novel plot concept of *Joyce* being a slayer (the mind boggles).
And watching confrontations between this Buffy and Spike is going to be *very* interesting.
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September 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm really liking the bits of back story being given, fleshing out the storyline. Spike's musing on the slayers he's bested clearly stated he'd only gotten two, so I'm intrigued by what he was really doing with Joyce on the night she was killed. This chapter filled in some plot points and moved the story along at a fast clip. I'm looking forward to more.
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September 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey addie...this is very interesting and I hope you decide to continue with the story:)
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September 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW some intense feelings there going on for buffy. Giles having issues too. I am really liking this story and I am anxious to see where you take it.
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September 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
definitely liked the first and second chapter, not sure about the last chapter. more spike and buffy interaction please?
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September 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Still very much interested! Can't wait for more Spuffy interaction, though!
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September 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Really enjoy how you made us think the Slayer was Buffy, but it isn't.
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September 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey there! just read the 3 chapters, liked it...and would like more, of course! good writing and plotting as always!