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Hey you keep writing i will keep reading no problem. EXCELLENT chapter. The emotions were spot on and very much the real deal. Now get back to writing or I will send palemeto bugs after you LMAO...just kidding...

Fantastic story. A real twist on the whole universe. I was entralled while I was reading the first 11 chapters. I hope to read a lot more. I like the dangling plot lines that you have going -- the affect of the claim, who killed Joyce and what is going to happen in the relationship. I'm really looking forward to reading more.

Woo hoo! I just found a lot of new chapters! Dead computer for a while so it's great to find this much good stuff now that I got a new one. Poor Buffy. Street smart but not really smart about males and she is not as smart about vampires as she thought she was. Thanks for continuing this story!!

I loved Buffy's addled line "[t]he only lust I feel for you is the lust you make me feel by forcing your lust on me." That confused, accidentally inuendo filled statement made me laugh nearly as much as the image of Buffy in her new, hideous sweatshirt. I hope she pulls that little eyesore on every time Spike is "forcing his lust on her..." It should rein the lust in on his side. This was a fast paced, entertaining chapter and the sex scene was erotic. I hope Buffy has a talk with Spike about Joyce one of these days. I realize she doesn't care that her hot/cold attitude must not make any sense to him, but I'd still like to learn what happened to Joyce.

hee Buffy buying the ugly sweater just to annoy him made me laugh. And I liked how you wrote the conflicting emotions of Buffy. The scene where he watches her sleep is sweet. the sex scenes were hot of course. Oh and the sex pistols are so not bad music! just wanted to say that *grins*

Good gods that was nice hotness. Buffy alway always fighting what she feels. You wrote this chapter very well. Spike making complete sense. Ummmm that lil bite she made during the shagging. Hmmmmm seems like she maybe wanting the same thing he does and just does not know it yet.

i like it so far. Different alternate world with Joyce as a slayer. hope to see more but havent finished reading the rest of the fic so far.

Wow! This has been a very good Spuffy story! Interesting idea and unique perspective on the characters within a different context... Not to mention, it's very well written with very good characterizations.

I tend to be reluctant to read alternate time line/alt universe style stories, but i was pleasantly surprised at how quickly I became engrossed with this one after noticing it at AFF tonight. But then, I've like all of your stories to date so I shouldn't be too surprised at how well done this one is too... ;-)

Please do continue working on this story. It is a fine addition to your collection of excellent Spuffy fics!

Sincerely,
GS

I'm enjoying this fic- so, yes, please do update. But take all the time you need, because I like where this is going. Also, I know someone asked earlier if Spike killed her mom, but I want to go on record saying "no, he didn't" because Spike mentioned he'd killed 2 slayers, not 3. I'm going to go back and check, but I'm pretty sure that is what he said in an earlier chapter. :-) Keep up the good work!

mmmmmmmmmm the web weaving is getting thicker here. I am so happy to see you were able have the muse let you write more now that Need has finished. This is a great story. I think the angst and emotions are going to really grow here. The truth shall set them free but first it's going to really piss them off.