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by Arralethe

person Jenny
schedule November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story. Love the plot so far. Please update soon.

//Jenny
person MarzBar
schedule September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YIKES! Wasn't Spike paying attention when Buffy did her disappearing act? What demon has she indentured herself to? More please.
person MarzBar
schedule September 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The PTB want a notoriously horny demon (Spike) to rescue and reform a newly made demon who titillates males for a living (Buffy)? Interesting premise. You have to give us more soon.
person Brunettepet
schedule September 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your portrait of conflicted, soulless Spike wanting to both rescue and corrupt "Beth" is already a lot of fun. Their scenes together, real and imagined, have been vividly detailed and rife with tension. I'm looking forward to more back story for Buffy's new status - who is she working for and how did that employment come about? Whistler was a good plot device, though he posed more questions than he answered. I'm looking forward to more of this.
person Ella
schedule September 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you shouldn't label this as a PWP. it definitely has a plot. did you read the story codes?
person rockerbaby
schedule September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Just found this story. Awesome start. Can hardly wait for more. Please update soon!!
person MarzBar
schedule September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
EEK! Is Buffy more of a demon than her regular dose of slayer demon? More please.
person MarzBar
schedule September 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
She's playing with fire in public! His demon is winning and wants to take her NOW. More soon please.
person Burnz
schedule September 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I always liked the dark haired version of Buffy. :) It seems that Spike's forgotten where he is huh? Good chapter.
person nat
schedule September 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! That was one hot chapter. I think I need a cigarette.......