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for Will I ever?

by DeliciousSin

person Anon
schedule September 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good cliffhanger! VERY good story so far. more please :)
person pinkyblue_ice
schedule September 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
woooo still lovin it. please update really soon
person MarzBar
schedule September 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Will he be able to catch her before her blockhead manages to convince her of something totally bogus? More please.
person chanel 5
schedule September 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I was worried it was gonna be a case of near miss or something. yay that he's seen her!
person moon29us
schedule September 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow. okay so not fair to just leave us hanging like that. i hope you get the next chapter up soon. this is a really interesting story.
person Lauren
schedule September 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story! I can't wait to find out what happens next. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!
person rockerbaby
schedule September 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome start. Looking forward to reading more. Hope she runs into Spike again soon and they can work things out Please update soon.
person pinkyblue_ice
schedule September 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg i love it so much. please update really soon. you rock
person *mysterio*
schedule September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is sweet... in a twisted, drunken madness sort of way.
person spikestheman
schedule September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey not bad for a first fic..I really liked it...so keep it coming:)