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for The Butterfly Effect

by cousinjean

person Verona
schedule November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Truly amazing. Wonderful really. The ending I would've wanted, as would so many other fans. This story was incredible and now I plan to read all your others. Thank you for writing it, it was so great.
person sandy
schedule November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
One of the best Buffy-Spike fanfics ever. Gorgeous writing. Perfect characterizations. Wouldn't change a word.
person greyangel
schedule September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I agree with Lenore, she said eveything I wanted to say about this moving and at times tearful story, it was beautiful, a real pleasure to read, each chapter flowing softly into the next and the ending was extremly satisfying...well done, on a truely wonderful piece of writing...I'll be looking up more of your work...thank you for sharing this one with us.
person Jennifer
schedule September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It's absolutely stunning. Your words, your plots... Brilliant. I'm a long fic lover, but yours don't have to be long for me to love it. Wonderful, wonderful story. Thank you!
person Lenore
schedule September 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is my second reading of this story. It just gets better and better. I read a bit of the LJ and I'm so sorry there won't be the sequels but I understand real life can throw things for a loop. Butterfly Effect is one of my all time favorite fanfics and better than most commercial BtVS books. I hope you can find time to continue with your writing. You are extremely talented. There's nothing I can say about this story as a criticism. The characters were perfectly written, no false voice to any of them.
The story itself was beautifully concieved and executed. A great job. Thank you,
person Tara
schedule September 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was just amazing! This story idea has been done many times over, but your take on it was excellent. Can't wait to read more of your work.
person Brunettepet
schedule September 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was a wonderful time travel story, and I especially enjoyed Season 2 Spike evolving through the chapters. Buffy's grief was vivid and heart breaking, and the two of them opening up to one another was lovely to read. The last chapter was a wonderful surprise, and a great emotional payoff. Mudge and Ethan were working together for some nefarious scheme, I'm looking forward to finding out what it is.
person rockerbaby
schedule September 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful story. Think I was in tears throughout all of the last couple chapters. Thanks for sharing. Looking forward to reading more of your stories!
person nique
schedule September 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh My God, that was sooo good. I really loved it. So why did ethan and the green demon steal the book and cross? I'm kinda confussed on that part.
person Jerrica
schedule September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Lovely story. Great twist at the end. Keep 'em coming.