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for Little Sister, Don't You

by Janina

person jen
schedule August 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
"How could he be a sinner if she was his angel" kinda sounds like something out of angel sanctuary?
Are you gonna set Doyle up with someone? Don't just leave him all lonely gay hook him up with someone!:)
loved chapter 5 and 6 stupid Xander for giving such bad advice. loved that you chose Harmony to hit on Spike she's the perfect fit for the part all looks no brains.. I hope that Spike will understand soon that making out with random women isn't gonna solve his problem.
Love your fic update soon please:)
person MarzBar
schedule August 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Like the gay Doyle best friend. She's going to need his help to get over her silly incest ideas where Spike is concerned. More please.
person lovesbitca37
schedule August 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh! That was a great ending! Was it Spike that drove Drusilla insane? I can't wait to see what happens between them :) Great story.
person jen
schedule August 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
more please loved it:) Why did you choose Doyle as Buffy's best friend?
person Anon
schedule August 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow this story is so hot! I love the way Spike has just decided to go with it even though he feels it's wrong. Please. let there be no setbacks. :)
person klylu
schedule August 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi brat! nice start... i keep wondering what's spike's secret... maybe i've got an idea on the reason he left and i'm curious to see if i'm right or wrong! please update soon!! (i'm goning on holiday and i really wanna know more before i left!! ;P )
person willowmouse
schedule August 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love your stories, so happy to see another & this has real potential, I bet i know why he didnt contact her!!n cant wait for more
person jen
schedule August 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow I can't believe I'm already hooked on this story after only 2 chapters! You've got a real talent for describing people and emotions. THe scene where you describe Spike arriving and getting out of the car I could really see him standing in front of me. And Buffys reaction to Spike her happiness and rage were written very convincingly. can't wait for more please update soon
person aliciaspiked
schedule August 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like the plot so far. The conversations are great and I can't wait for more. I love that you have Doyle in the story. Please update soon! I know you're always good about that.
person MarzBar
schedule August 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Glad to see a new story from you, Brat. Love the beginning and will be looking forward to more.