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Hey, Great job so far! Really unusual story line and I"m glad you're updating it so frequently
I wouldn't worry too much about the accent. Can't please everybody. Hun, I'm canadian and I can't tell you how many times I"ve seen American shows portray us as those 'durn Canuckers with them cheezy accents, ey?'
I just shrug and carry on *S*. Mighty decent of you to apologise though...it was a sweet gesture *S*.

Anywho...one teeny thing about chapter six. I think you mistook the Pentagon on the wall for the Pentagram *G*. You ment the five pointed star in a circle, not the five sided geometric figure right? five pointed star in a circle is a pentagram *S*.

Keep up the good work!


Falcon.

Wonderful job again. One little thing. The Pentagon is a building in Washington, DC. I think you want pentacle or pentagram. At any rate, keep up the good job.

Josie, I have to tell you I am disappointed at your "Alabama" setting. I have lived in Alabama all of my 51 years, and I remember the Civil Rights movement of the sixties, I remember the Selma to Montgomery march, I remember the bus boycott. I need to tell you that Alabamians do NOT talk like the ones you have protrayed. Not even the rural Alabamians. If the dialogue you write resembles anythng, it is "mountain speech." YOu might hear something along those lines amonfg the less educated people living in the Appalachians, but not down in Alabama, Georgia or Mississippi.

It is very discouraging to find that the prejudice that stereotypes southerners as ignorant, stupid and bigoted lives on among Buffy fans, too. I had expected better.

--Dee

Another great chapter. Update soon please.

A great chapter. Watch the typos and I think you left out a word, but other than that great job. Update soon please and thanks for the email too.

Humans are sic!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

You're just not into happy fluffy stories are you? That's ok, you're stories are so wonderful it doesn't really matter. Update soon please.

i love this. my poor boys. next part soon please.

Brilliant as always Josie *GRIN*. Looking forward to the next installment!

Hey, I read this on Bloodclaim, but I havn't replied there yet. I just wanted to say this story is fantastic. I feel so bad for Xander and Spike and everybody. I really hope you'll post more soon. and yea I get to be first:)