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September 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very nice chapter. One little quibble though. A warlock is an oath breaker, not a male witch. A male witch is called a witch.
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September 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very nice, more soon please.
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September 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. Initative scum killing Buffy. grrrr Just a couple things. I thought the dog was female and who's Danny? I thought Jon's partner was Eddie.
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September 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOO HOO! Sounds like Red and Buffy made it. Hope it's them that just 'dropped' in. Can't wait for the next chapter so please hurry.
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September 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
And the tension mounts. ACK! Hurry with the next chapter please! I'm not sure how long I can wait.
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September 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I stayed up till the wee hours reading this story, and I am really enjoying it. I am writing with one request. If you bring Riley into this, please don't make him a monster. If you don't like Riley, please just leave him out of the story entirely. I hate it when writers twist characters they dislike so out of shape that they are unrecognizable. Forgive my hubris, I have always been of the opinion that writers should write whatever they want. But I'd hate to end up not finishing this story when I am enjoying it so well. Thanks for sharing.
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September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow love the idea and I cant wait till the next chapter to find out what happens next.
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September 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter. One little thing, you've got Eddie openning his wrist and putting it to Eddie's mouth when they're fixing Jonothan's leg. Also, how were the Initative able to catch Buffy and what about all the other Slayers that were created at the end of Buffy? She was able to whip an entire squad and she was holding back. Just something that's bugging me.
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September 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very well done. Keep up the good work and update soon please.
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August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice chapter. Glad to see that the boys found a friend. One question: Is Xander's ocular implant still working? If it is, won't the Initative come looking for him? Ok, that's two questions, but I'm curious.