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for After the Fall

by JLH

person kilroy
schedule October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
two hours ago i ran a bath, but then i found your fic. my bath is now cold and i'll have to start again, but i don't care. this fic is awesome! i love all the characters...except the iniative scumbags and their sympathisers obviously...and really hope they get to be happy and free evetually. as for the reviewer who took offence at the portrayal of people from alabama , well, i come from the s/w of england and we are often portrayed on t.v as smock wearing, straw chewing ,tourist fleecing yokels !!do i care? not a lot. lifes too short !
person TheShadowCat
schedule October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*sniff* That was so sweet. But I have a feeling that the Initative isn't done with them yet. Please hurry with the next chapter.

ps - If you need help with the developmental stages of human children, just let me know. Been there a couple of times myself.
person Weeee :D
schedule October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh Dear, i've just finished reading your story and I realized I hadn't reviewed once. I just want to congradulate you for writing such a great story. It was very very lovely. Beautifully done, and I hope there's more to come. Please keep up the good work. When the 'nice ladies' went up against the soldier, it just made me ache, because I thought something bad could've happened to them. When Spike had to make that hard decision to turn Xander or not totally made me cry. Oh my god, that was sooo freaking good! It was sooo sad and sooo mushily gooooodd. Waahh. Heh. I love you for writing this! :hugs:
person TheShadowCat
schedule October 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You know, the scary thing is, our current government is already acting like that in some areas. Spooky. At any rate, hurry up with an update, what are you planning on doing to poor Dan?
person TheShadowCat
schedule October 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
EEK! Hurryhurryhurryhurryhurry with the next chapter. GAH! I don't think I can take the wait.
person Selene
schedule October 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hehe, love it!!! makes me cry when i read the whole thing over again, but it makes sense that is really weird cause there is the distinct possibility that it really could happen in this world someday soon
person TheShadowCat
schedule October 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm not sure how I missed the last few updates, but I'm caught up now. Great job. It seems the McPherson's(sp?) need to see a doctor about their cranial rectal inversion.
person TheShadowCat
schedule September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter. I was wondering what the side effects of using that much power would be. Update soon please.
person TheShadowCat
schedule September 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, another great chapter. I can't wait to see where you're going with this. Please update soon.
person TheShadowCat
schedule September 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice chapter, once more. I'm assuming that since the triplets are demon babies that is why you've started them on spagetti and not pureed foods like fruits and veggies.