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for After the Fall

by JLH

person TheShadowCat
schedule November 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Cutting it a bit close there, my dear. If hadn't just had my nails done, I would have been biting them throughout this chapter. Great job. Please hurry with the next update.
person rein
schedule November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story.. I've also read honorable sons.. keep writing more and hope that inspiration never leaves you. thanks
person TheShadowCat
schedule November 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
GAH! Hury up with the next chapter, please! I'm not sure if I can wait much longer for the next chapter.
person TheShadowCat
schedule October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter as usual. When I visited London this past summer I was given the impression that the city had been built by gophers. Please hurry with the next chapter please. I want to know what's up with Dawn.
person TheShadowCat
schedule October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great update. It'll be interesting to see how they handle the next attack.
person chibifae
schedule October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow. this is really good. I love your plot. beautiful. update soon
person TheShadowCat
schedule October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, very nice. I see the Initative is still being a royal pain, but every story needs a big bad.
person TheShadowCat
schedule October 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very nice chapter. Bit worried about those first 'visitors' and I'm sure we haven't seen the last of them. Update soon please.
person DeeDee
schedule October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this is a rollercoaster story of emotions, I've cried at the evilness and smiled at the love of the family, oh what a great stoy I can't wait for more.
person TheShadowCat
schedule October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice to see that things are working out well, but I have a feeling that some time soon, all hell's going to break loose.