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for After the Fall

by JLH

person TheShadowCat
schedule November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another wonderful chapter. Can't wait to see what the future will hold for them.
person Selene
schedule November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awww *cries* love it!!! wish i had your natural talent!!
person DeeDee 5 by 5
schedule November 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I cried again, thank you for this wonderful story, I hope the soldier doesn't report them, please let him be a goodie.
person Fan Girly
schedule November 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
just amazing I am so glad that David did not turn out to be heartless. I look forward to reading more.
person TheShadowCat
schedule November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, another great chapter. You have me totally spell bound with this story. Please hurry with the next chapter.
person Selene
schedule November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aww, love the story!!! wish i had your talent!!
person TheShadowCat
schedule November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another wonderful chapter. I'm sitting on pins and needles in worry for the families. Let's hope Gaia gets over her temper tantrum soon. More soon I hope.
person DeeDee 5 by 5
schedule November 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh you made me cry again, sad and happy tears,
sad that they had to run again and so happy that they weren't found,
this is such a rollercoaster of emotions and such a great story,thank you for the update.
person Selene
schedule November 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow...love it!!! would that i could see into the future so as to get updates faster....more pleeeease!!!
person Fan Girly
schedule November 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
THIS STORY IS AMAZING!!!! I thought i was gonna die when they opened that cave! They have to all be ok, they simply have to! The kids have to be safe, thank god for Dawn! I hope you update soon and I hope the inititive is stoped the fuckers! Great Story!

Fan Girly