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August 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You have got to continue this brilliant series.
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August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
poor buffy. hey, i think you write pretty good. one down point is that you don't show enough how this effects buffy in her life. how does she reacts to a friendly hug from xander. does it change anything when she's slaying, do the vamps smell the sex on her and make crude remarks about it? does her mom, giles and her friends ask questions about strange behaviour on buffy's part. do they notice anything unusual about her?
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August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What if Snyder knocked her up? He He He then she'd be tied to him forever...... Just a thought.
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August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
intersting get willow in there and maybe a few others then hav him go 4 dawn and hav buffy attack him or something.
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August 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good smutty stuff - post more soon!
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August 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great start, I'm starting to really enjoy Buffy humiliation fics and this is among the best I've read so far.
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August 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excellent punishment fanfic, you have got to update this soon!
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August 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A brilliant story. I love humil fanfic and this is one of the best i have ever seen. Please, please update soon.
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August 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is hot in a very naughty way...looking forward to more!