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for Buffy's punishment

by awolja111

person Charismatic Enigma
schedule November 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awsome story line!!! can't wait for the next chapter(s) to be posted. Keep up the good work
person DarkOne
schedule November 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I m eager to read the next chapter.
I agreed that it would be better to concentrate only on Buffy.

Snyder should force her to come to class braless with progressivly see through shirt.
Snyder could summon Joyce at school and say her, in front of Buffy, how much he disapproves this provocative dressing even if the teachers greatly enjoy and even if the school rules authorize such an exhibition.
Maybe he could put his hand inside buffy's shirt and grope her a bit in front of Joyce.

Later Snyder may also force Buffy to pose, first topless, next full naked, for the drawing class or the photo club
person anon
schedule October 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Love it! This is so hot -- please update!
person d.a.m
schedule October 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It just occurred to me, what everhappened to the corsetthat gave Buffy "an hourglass figure"?
It didn't appear in the last chapter.
person d.a.m
schedule October 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am eagerly awaiting the next update for this excellent story, i do have one point to make- its supposed to be Buffy's punishment, shouldn't the story be only about Buffy?
person Jennilee
schedule October 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yahoo! An update! great chapter. Seems how it's Buffy's Punishment, how's about Snyder punishes her with a little beastiality? Buffy gets done by Snyder's dog! Or puts her a cage with a Werewolf and lets him fuck her crazy all night long? Or maybe Buffy's forced to fuck some local demons, or city officials that Snyder's rounded up? I can't wait for more chapters!
person constance
schedule October 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great to see this story being updated. Do hope you continue.
person d.a.m
schedule October 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Any rough time the next chapter will come out?
this is an excellent story.
person Dragula
schedule October 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Love the fic, really didnt expect to see you continue it after it being so long since part four was put up, continue the good work
schedule October 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
THANK YOU for updating!!
I really enjoyed your story so far and liked the new chapter 5.
Your set up for the 'meeting' between Buffy and Willow is great, especially that Buffy has to be there earlier.
Hope she is put in proper position to meet her friend.
I also like your ideas on punishments for Buffy (Snyder seems to like nipple torture).
Please keep up your good work and I hope you post chapter 6 (the weekend from hell?) soon.

Many thanks again for this great story.