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August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It is awesome!!!! Are you trying to kill me? Why the hell did you leave it off there? Now I'm going to spend all night wondering if Spike is going to get tortured more!!*pouts* Poor Spike. I like the fact that Buffy forgives Xander just like that. So many fics have her as a bad person. It's refreshing to have someone who actually likes her a little bit. I personally think that the chosen one shouldn't be a bad person, but I'm open to other people's ideas. Well this is getting to be an entirely too long review, so update soon *new and improved Xander puppy eyes* PLEASE??!!! *pretty pout* See ya
~Elaine
~Elaine
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August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
more xand, more xander, more more more xander!!!!
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August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Lovely story!! Please don't leave us hanging and update soon. Thanks for sharing!!
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August 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You have to update soon. Please??? I love it so far. *gives best xander puppy eyes*
~Elaine
~Elaine
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August 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
spike u idoit does he know a good thing when he see's it
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August 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awww, poor xand!!! in love with a prick
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August 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just love a good Spander, and this is very good indeed. The characters are done wonderfully, and your writing style is a sheer pleasure to read. You know how to build a good story with a nice flow, and you obviously know how to write hot man-lovin'. The only thing I'd like to point out is that you should separate Xander's thoughts from the rest of the text. There aren't enough of those to make it really confusing, but it would be better all around. Just a little hint, though, as I remain waiting for the next chapter.
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August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Rainy day fealing.
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August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm hooked! Please keep writing!
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August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
10/10 next chapter soon please