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for Why Not?

by xmyheart

person Windandsummer
schedule September 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow this is realy good so far, i love that Buffy didnt make the whole switch thing messy please update soon!
person Ashley
schedule September 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You love cliffhangers dont you! Thats just evil :) I love this story I hope to see an update soon! Again, great story!
person Elaine
schedule August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hello again. I've said it once and I'll say it again you are a tease. Though I admit it was longer than the last one, and less teasing I suppose, and they did get a little bit of action, and......ok you won. I'm just being bitchy because 1. I am one and 2. I really like this story and want more. Please make more soon. At least by next Saturday?? *pouty lips and pleading Xander chibi eyes* I'm glad you think I'm amusing. I really like your story and can't wait to see what the ritual is.
~Elaine
person ran
schedule August 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
arrrrgggg i wanna know what happens! Please update soon!
person Siarra
schedule August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Evil cliffhanger! I'll lose my mind over the excitement of what Spike is going to say. I'd also love to know if the Spikenapping is going to have a bigger, apocalypse-brewing meaning towards the plot or was it just a necessary twist to throw them together... I just love the way you handled the situation with Buffy, by the way. I was already mentally preparing for the usual selfish, bimbo-blonde hissy fit so this was very refreshing for a change. The italics worked out nicely, and the way you wrote the emotional tension in chapter four was simply wonderful.
I hope you'll give us the next chapter soon, because I'm hooked...
person Elaine
schedule August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ok I'm having second thoughts here. At first I thought you were just a tease with these cliffies, but now I see your true colors. Excuse me when I take a favorite quote from Spike *clears voice* Your evil pet. *clears voice again* UGH. I want more. *whines at high pitched voice* Well in case your thinking i'm being mean or something.: this is not a flame. I love the story. I'm just urging you (hurriedly) to continue. I maybe a little harsh with this, but it was a really short chapter *whines again* Please do more soon very very soon (did i mention soon?) PLEASE??!?!? *Xander and Willow combined puppy eyes* Your reader and friend (hopefully)
~Elaine
person RemityGirl
schedule August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
URGH!!! You've left us hanging in the breeze, my Dear. Please update soon. It's always a little fun to watch Spike have to kick himself for being an idiot. Can't wait to read it!!! SOOOO.....please update again...soon!!! Thanks for sharing!
person Alice
schedule August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ACK! More More More!!! You can't leave it like this!
person Selene
schedule August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!! need moooooorrrreee!!!!
person Anon
schedule August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aaahh poor spike