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for Only Time

by LordFangSpike

person Pureevil230
schedule September 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
um where's the stry? your summary sounded interesting and then...i open it and there's not much there? i hope your play goes/went ok but can you please write!
person Anon
schedule August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmm...Very intense,and I like where you seem to be taking this. A little on the short side though,maybe future chapters can be longer? Just a suggestion.