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for Little Sister

by GoldenBuffy

person Sandra
schedule October 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I just read the story and i love to read the end of it. Please continue updating!!!! Please, pretty Please!!!
person Julz
schedule November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please Please Please continue!!!!!!!
person Spikes Girl
schedule September 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please wright more soon, updates seem to have stopped and it's killing me.
person Goldylocks
schedule September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love the story so far, I'm on the edge of my seat. Hope all is well with you cause at first it seemed updates were coming thick and fast, but now not so much. Please write more soon.

Luv 'n' hugs
person jen
schedule August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Back from croatia.... loved it there:D

I read the your new chapters first thing after I got home.. running on to hours sleep and having survived a 11 hour trip back home. Ok here's my review:

Giles and Mrs. Summers are SO cute I love their relationship *grins*
The forced makeover session for Spike and Angel was hilarious (does anyone know how to spell this word? I don't) just picture the characters from the actual series doing something like that :D
I loved you the description of the pictures from middleschool... darla in a seethrough shirt and spike in tweed... poor spikey having his embarassing past revealed even in this AU fic
Buffys daydream was unbeleavable hot I wish she would have actually done it:)
you menaged to describe spike and buffys dilemma very well with the almost kiss scene on the sofa
What the hell is angel and spike's plan?! Why is Buffy's dress color such a big deal for the plan? and is the remark that they'll make her prom unforgettable a threat or a promise? You're such a tease ;)
I think with the rape issue you managed to raise your story on a different level. It gives the story more depth and makes it not just a fun story to read but something to think about and maybe even something to learn from. I loved Spike for "rescuing" Buffy from her nightmares by just being there for her and staying with her on the porch.

Phu I think that's all I wanted to say.. can't wait for the next chapter:)
person Mole
schedule August 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sweet fic, I like it. So, keep the good work going!!!
person pinkyblue_ice
schedule August 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very very good. please update soon
person Niesje
schedule August 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Update fast please!!!! I love the series so far and was disappointed to reach the end of a chapter and find there was nothing to go on with :(... Seriously I love the series so far and really want to see what happens next..
person aliciaspiked
schedule August 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I thought the last chappy was a lot of fun. Keep it up!
person Jen
schedule August 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I've just read chapter 10 (must have missed when you updated)

I loved Angel in this chapter... you discribed him brilliantly with that throbbing veine when he shouts at buffy from the practice room and his reactions to Giles and his mom getting married (Congrats by the way.. yes I do know their only fictional but still I'm happy for them:D) You made Angel a very convincing big brother in this chapter.

The scene where Joice makes Buffy and Angel say their sorry is so funny:)

Finally Soike and Buffy talked. I loved it that she was'nt the shy little girl during the scenes in his room.. and they used a condom at last even they can learn;)

Do we know who Buffys Ex who hurt her was? I think somewhere it says Riley but I'm not sure. Are we going to hear more about their relationship and what went wrong? And did she have sex before the time with spike?

I might read and review chapter eleven today but can't promise cos my plane leaves in a few hours and I still got to clean the flat and pack... I HATE packing! Anyways I'm going to be away for two weeks but after that ? will read every new chapter and review them faithfully.. promise ;)