rate_review Reviews

I love what you did with the twins and can't wait for the next part. Keep up the wonderful work.

What? Only 4 chapters? I'm loving this story, particularily how Spike and Angel watch their loves grow up, priming them for adulthood and being childer. Please update soon!

Loving this but wishing Riley would grow up soon. Miss all the hot sex. :)

Interesting, I look forward to the next part. Keep it up.

Well, sux to be Pat that's for friggin' sure..... And just for the record not only do all of my voices but the friends I've gotten to read this fic all want twincest!! *^^* They don't have to be a main pairing or anything I just want to see some good hard 'brotherly love'!! (nudge nudge, poke poke)^.~* Can you really blame us though, your Riley-siblings are awesome!! ^^ They deserve only the best, not my fualt that in the twin's casses it's each other. Oh and if you turn them into vamps I suggest a sanity reduction. Not quite Drusilla low but to the point of being perfect (platonic)playmates and gardians for her(nothing-little sexual intent) maybe less of a language barier, seeing as almost no one can ever understand her. Sry, I don't remember if you ever mention but is Dru 'alive' so to speak and gonna stay that way? 'Cause I really liked her....

Luck&Love ~Skittles

Well, you can pretty much consider me sold on *any* pairing you choose to throw at me from now on. The possessiveness, the lack of partner-swapping, the strong but fragile boys on the bottom... yum. (All of which, of course, only works because you can write well to begin with. I *love* it when that happens.)

Er, in any case, it's really interesting to see Angelus monitoring Riley's early life this obsessively... I keep making bets with myself whether he'll let Riley out long enough to join the Initiative - if he even knows about it - or if this Riley is going to go down a completely different path. Either way, I know I'm going to enjoy the ride. ^_^

Awe!! You replied to my review!! How nice of you! And personally I support the Ripper-Doctor theory. It makes sence in some aspects, but others are still unexplainable. I'm a bit of an Alexander the Great, WW2 and Jack the Ripper enthusiast so I try to keep up with rescent findings concerning those bits of history. *^^* Oh, and I'm curious if you'll be doing a special chapter mentioning D Day, or if something will be happening that's all importanty having to do with it?
Anyway, I'm a Spike/Xan fan too but completely agree that 'Gelus/Riley is way under used!! It's just such a fun and exciting pairing!! Elain also sounds interesting as does the Twins from Hell that you brefiely discribed. I can't wait for 'Gelus to "scare them streight". I wonder, are you a twincest fan? if so will one of the minor couples be these twins once they get all 'Order-fied'? Just curious. I'll be waiting to see some updates!!^.~*

Luck&Love ~Skittles

Oh, this is a wonderful story so far. I am a huge Spike/Xander fan, but I love what you're doing with Angelus and Riley. I'm a sucker for time travel stories that change the future. While I know this primarily focuses on A/R, I would love a little more backstory on Spike and Xander and what happened when they first arrived in the past. The moment where Xander hugged and kissed Angelus before they left got my attention and made me wonder. Also, the part about master vampires being able to change their appearance by aging at will was inspired. Angelus being a doctor was deliciously ironic. Please continue this soon. I can't wait for the next part.

I agree there isn't enough Riley fiction. I really like Riley fic when he's the submissive with either Spike or Angelus. He's such a big guy that somehow it just works. Great job! I can't wait for the next part.

You have made me fall seriously in love with the idea of Angel... well, *your* Angel, and Riley as a couple. The possessiveness, the attention, the complexity of Riley's nature, it's all just lovely to read. (And re-read, and re-read, and read once more for luck...) Wonderful!