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for Breathing By Rote

by scyllablue

person sablerose2
schedule January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Are you going to write more? Please say and soon I love this story. So please more soon
schedule December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I was so happy to get my internet back and see that you had updated. I can't wait for the next part. Poor puppies, stuck in wolf form for a year. Spike with the control was great as was Graham. I look forward to the next part. Keep up the wonderful work. :)
person nelson
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
happy dance happy dance. I love this story. Are you going to put parker in the mix and what about oz and willow will they stay a couple? I'm so waiting on the xan and spike togatherness.
person Alice
schedule November 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wait, so Elaine and Connor are vampires, Ian and Patrick are werewolves, and Moira is still human, just claimed? Great story, love it! But did Dru die? Please update soon!
person Purple Mist
schedule October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OH-MY-GOD!! I don't know how you did it, but I actually LIKE Riley in this fic!! ....well, so far anyway. Here's to hoping that the rest of the fic will be just as interesting and just plain good as chapter one. Oh, and Angelus is hot. Evil, hot, but without that whole i'll rape everyone in sight some authors make him out to be. Great job! ^_^
person chibifae
schedule October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
loving it. i love how this is evolving. can't wait for more. I love the Yellows. heh lilah really got it bad. last chapter awesome, Walsh won't know what hit her, lol trogan horse indeed. update soon
person rngrdead
schedule October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
gahhh yum and what a family!!!... Ian and Patrick... perfect ;-)

J
person rngrdead
schedule October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh and I am *so* remiss.... just discovered your story and I am utterly *hooked* Please update soon ... if muse needs chocolate .... or ... whatever... but *please* ::kneels obediently and looks up with hopeful puppydog eyes::

L
J
person CammyKat
schedule October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You Evil Evil little so and so! CLIFFHANGER?! *wails* Noooooooooooooo!! on a happyer note *dances* I guessed RIGHT!! *woot woot* I love where your going with this ... though mind you a gota wee bit confused till I relised that the 'other' twins were Moria's kids, she called one Liam? Awww anyways I NEED THE NEXT CHAPTER!! neeeeeed.... no I'm not addicted.... I can stop any time I like <.< >.> <.< ^.^
person j
schedule October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thank you *so* much for sharing your talent!

This is a wonderful series.... just read it from beginning to ch 13 and cannot wait for more... the extra characters are beautifully painted and the interactions between known ones brilliantly depicted. The plot line is wonderful....

Encore encore!

L
J