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I really love what you have written so far and I hope that this has not been abandoned. It is funny because I never liked Riley that much but the way you write him makes me really love him and the Riley/Angelus you have going on here is just fascinating!

Just a note on your chapter 2 AN: I didn't like Riley in the series because he and Buffy were so very very bad for each other. Since the show is Buffy the Vampire Slayer, not Riley the Commando Guy, we tend to see and support Buffy's POV. Personally, I like him if he is not Buffy's boyfriend or mean to Spike.

I'm glad that you have one more part done really liking this please more soon. It's been awhile but I still remember this sooo please more soon e-mail me and let me know when you have more please!

Oh I do hope that you will finish this story I wait with anticipation on what will happen next. Please update often and soon.

i luv ur story i hope u will go into more detail wit spike and xanders relationship. ur story is extremely intricate and creative which makes it even better and i hope u will continue to post chapters soon. i cant wait! will Angelus ever turn Moira? Will he turn Cordelia? wat about Gunn and Connor- wait has he turned Connor yet?

Hi,

I was so happy to see a new chapter of this story. I really love the flow of the story. So, will spike claim xan soon? And when will Angel return to claim riley?

I finally returned to reading this fic and I'm greatly delighted with how it's turning out so far. Sorry to hear Angelus feels like he raped Riley, as it really didn't strick me as such. Please do have Wesley come into ANgelus' court. A Watcher on their side would be a good idea and he could help with Connor. I'm also enjoying how Spke and Xander are coming together; and how you've included Graham into the plot. I love how he helped out SPike with the chip. I can't wait to read Riley and Angelus' coming together, no more hidding or anything. Keep up the wonderful story.

Brilliant... and ohhh *so* welcome... thank you

The characterisations of Doyle and Riley and Xan...and the twins... perfect as always!

Encore!

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I was so happy to see that you updated. Poor Connor, at least he's getting better. Anyway, I can't wait for the next part and Spike was so cute at the end. Update again soon!

I love this story. I really like watching all the different relationships develop though Xander and Spike are my favorite. Thanks for posting again.