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for Unexpected Redemption

by EvilButtMonkey

person Anon
schedule August 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i like the fact that youve skipped a couple of months. it is funnier with the baby a little older.
and can you say awwww!!! the 3 are so cute together!
i hope when willow finds them things wont get too bad for the happy family!
schedule August 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aww, that was so cute. Now I don't want Willow to find them. *pouts for good measure* Kinda nervous as to whats gonna happen with baby Hope when they get rescued.
person phoenixJay27
schedule August 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good chapters
the latter was especially cute.
you need a beta reader or something.
i undersatnnd what your're saying and all
but a lot of wrong word usage and such
anywas do get on with it and update soon
schedule August 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Why do I have a feeling that something's wrong with the baby? I mean, not 'wrong' wrong, but off. Like something happened that shouldn't have and it was for the baby. Ripper and the old Faith were a lot alike. And I don't like the council at all. Feel free to kill some of them off.
person Wicked_Punk_Angel
schedule August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
People dying in fics is only natural and makes the story more real. I love this story and Buffy and Faith are just so amusing in this fic. Looking forward to an update.
person badmonki
schedule August 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i have really enjoyed your story so far. please keep writing it!!!!
person Anon
schedule July 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aww hope thats cute. I think it was a good idea for the story to kill josephine so way to make the hard choices. I really really like this fic
person Anon
schedule July 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great new chapter!!!!
really great!so didnt see that coming!
i cant wait to see the slayers try to take care of the baby! so please update soon!
person ashley
schedule July 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
thanks for the update, and I'm sure coconut milk is just fine, I was just playin with you anyway. I loved the chapter
person K@y
schedule July 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You off'd her?!?!
Oh well...now the slayers have a baby.
That's gonna be cute to see in the long run...
Update soon!!! <3