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for Unexpected Redemption

by EvilButtMonkey

person Anon
schedule September 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great stuff!!! im really glad gils and willow are ok with faith
and please please update soon! i dont want this fic to end soon
person Wynter
schedule September 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was AWESOME!! I can't wait to see what happens next!! Keep up the good work babe!!

~Wyn
schedule August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Deciding to update my stories, I noticed that one of my favorites hasn't been updated in a while. *hint hint, wink wink* Please do not make me resort to ass kissing, cause I can tell you now, it wouldn't be pretty. And if it's about the beta thing I could help out, or find one for ya at least.
person phoenixJay27
schedule August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good chapter
short and predicatable but good
i'll be a beta for you if you like
but i only catch spelling errors and gramar.
i'm horrible at punctuation but i could help you a bit if ye like
anywas do carry on it is getting good
person Anon
schedule August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
loved the new chapter!
i so hate that quentin in every fic i read!!
but im really glad, cause the girls are gonna keep the baby right???
person LaJolie
schedule August 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
just wanna show my appreciation by reviewing. Like your story a lot. "take care of her, she;'s yours" huhuh! Probably that literaly? Looking fw to read more. Please continue soon!
And have you asked her out yet? Just do it! Go you!
person J
schedule August 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great story. I can't wait to see what happen when are found. please update soon
person Wynter
schedule August 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, if I remember in the series, if a person didn't want to be found, then anyone looking for them would have a bit more trouble locating them. Therefore the reason Willow couldn't find them for a couple of months was the simple fact that they didnt want to be found, as indicated in the most recent chapter (chap 11) of this story. But there are a few more powerful spells that could find them whether they want to be found or not. (ie the fact that Willow has found a spell)

Anyways the story is awesome I cant wait for more!!

~Wynter
person AR
schedule August 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aww that Hope is so cute, you know the baby looks a lot like Buffy and Faith you know with the green eyes wish are from Buffy and the dimple grin wish is from Faith they look like her parents. Well this chapter was really adorable and funny at the same time. Please please please update soon.
person Wicked_Punk_Angel
schedule August 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The baby sounded so cute!!!!! With the way the baby's physical features are described, u'd think it was Buffy and Faith's own kid...........