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person TheShadowCat
schedule July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, I guess it's time for Hy to make a reappearance and kick some butt. Of course, make up sex is so much fun.
person Kat
schedule July 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*hangs billboard that says "hoofuckingray for PORN!!!"*

Hot hot hot and thank the sex gods for olive oil! *cackles*

What more can I say? Ummmm, hooray for porn! *laughs*

Kat
person Susan
schedule July 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You're very welcome for the reviews. :) I am -so- enjoying the story! I can't wait to read more!!! Hot Trev and Eliot Porn! Woohoo!!!

Now get to the butt-kicking of the jerks who did this to Robert!!!! I wanna see GORE, dernit! Nobody should get away with what they did, even .... whatever they ares. I'm got a little theory on what they are, but I wanna wait to see if I'm right. ;)

I think I sent you an e-mail? Did you get it?
person TheShadowCat
schedule July 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice bit of smut there. Just goes to prove that necessity is the mother of invention. Of course, I'm never going to look at olive oil quite the same way ever again, but what do you want? Update soon please.
person RemityGirl
schedule July 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yeah Blue...I mean Tis...LOL!! Thanks for the updates. Ya know, I read every chapter...waiting with baited breathe for each one to be posted....sorry I don't review every time...sometimes I just forget but usually I'm still so caught up in the story in my head....I'm not thinking straight..hee-hee! Anyway, thanks for finally getting to Hy and the evil Brothers. I've been beggin' for some ass-kickin'...but it it makes sense for the story for them not to be able to hurt each other. Please update again soon. Thanks, as always for such addicting stories!! Rem...
person TheShadowCat
schedule July 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HAH! It worked. *snicker* Now just be a good little author and hurry up with the next chapter. Do we get a little Trev/El porn to boot? That might be fun.
person Susan
schedule July 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOO!!! Hot Spander Porn! Gotta love it. :)
person TheShadowCat
schedule July 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ARGH! No, they are NOT allowed to get away with what they did to Robert. Now you just get that next chapter up or...or...or I'll not review your next chapter. *hmph*
person Susan
schedule July 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh Man... Someone should slap the crap out of those ....whateverthehecktheyare.. I'm cheering for Hypatia to get over the crisis of faith and kick some hineys!

And Trev and Robert and Eliot? Ah, I wanna see 'em happy... :)

AND MORE SPANDER PORN!!! You do so well with that.. it's romantic and hot and ... wow. :)


Thanks ya!!
person Kat
schedule July 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
"I suppose I chose my body better than you did yours. At least mine has a functioning brain."
*rings a bell* DING DING DING, give the lady a prize! *G* Best line!! *laughs*

I'm still in shock over the fact she's related to the guys who raped Robert, but dayum... now the issue of why they're there and whether they have souls is just freaky. *bounces* Can't wait to see what's next for them all and if she ever gets her answers!!!

Oooo oo oo oo, is she gonna tattle on them? I can't wait to see the smack down Trevor and Elliot deliver. *cackles evilly* That would be so much fun!!

Kat