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by Tisienne

person catsim
schedule August 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my, this was just great! Loved it. The two 'men' proving to each other just how dense men can be about emotional things. Women Would Talk! Hee hee. Absolutely adored how the claim slammed open and all doubts about the other's feelings just were swamped with the truth.

Looking forward to the next bit. Curious about 'patia and what's going on with her and the PTB.

Love ya

cathy
person Littlest Coyote
schedule August 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your stories were reccomended by Susan and I have to say I've been enjoying them so far. I'm an admitted Spander junky and have to say your well-rounded characters and thought-out plot put your work in the upper percentage. I've got this story saved in my favorites with the WIP that I check on every day, so don't keep me in suspence for too long.
person Susan
schedule August 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
EEEEEEE!!! (sound of squeal)

What is she -up- to!!??!?!?! Ok.. ok, I'll wait. I won't -like- it, but I'll wait. :)

Excellent as usual. :)
person Kat
schedule August 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay, two chapters in one *G*. Was gone for a day, recovering a second day (I hate the heat!), so I'm behind on the reading.

You know, only Elliot has the balls to talk to Spike like this: "Obviously," the other man agreed, "But HOW stupid?" *cackles*

"Spike was convinced he was another Einstein... although with better hair. "
*laughs* Loved that line.

"Flouncy the Wonder-Ponce"
*shrieks and falls over laughing* ohmygod ohmygod.... *howls harder*

"Once again he was roped into being the bloody advice columnist to his Claimed's friends."
*giggles* Spike as Dear Abby....

Okay, onto chapter 30.... Wicked Bloke... *cackles*

Oh man Hypatia's gonna hook up with the guys that raped Robert? (I so wanna start calling him Bobby *G*) Man, that's just so wrong. When's she gonna wake up and realize that not having a soul doesn't mean you gotta be an ass?

*snicker* Pig-shaped lighter? I want one of those... (no I don't smoke anymore, I just collect weird things).

" Trevor... he was GOOD... focused happily on his mission."
SEE! Soul has nothing to do with it!

"He could remain ignorant."
*bangs head on table* Stupid, stupid woman.

"although she was well aware of the fact that he was far too good for the likes of her, considering what she now knew."
*yells* You bloody effing idiot! Soul isn't what he liked, you stupid, stupid woman!!!

"I hope I know what I'm doing..."
Yeah, screwing up big time ya daft git!

Sheesh, idiot woman. Now she's siding with those men who nearly broke Robert. She needs her ass kicked!

*blinks* What? Okay, so I'm wrapped 'round the axle about this. *takes a deep breath* BUT SHE'S BEING AN IDIOT!

Kat
person Susan
schedule July 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OOh OOohOOH!!!! Hurry Up I can't wait to see what Spike's gonna do! (My SO could use a few romantic pointers, and any source I can glean for ideas is always welcome. ;))


Sending the E-mail tonight, look for something with 'Spander Addict' in the Subject box! :)


That said: MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE!!! The withdrawals.. they itch!... ;)
person DaniKitten
schedule July 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I've been such a bad kitten for not reviewing like I should. I should be punished. By Spike and Xander. *nodnod* *laughs* Anyway, I was 'bout ready to kick Spike after the last chapter, but yay! He's working on fixing it, can't wait to see what he does.
person Susan
schedule July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooooooh... Poor Spike, he really -doesn't- get it, does he? Gotta feel sorry for the guy. Ok, not -really- since they'll work it out, right??

And it's alright about the e-mail.. if you like I can resend it whenever you like. :) That way you can be watching for it.


Meanwhile... MORE MORE MORE!!! I'd love to see Spike clued-in. ;) And find out about Hypatia and Robert and Trevor and Eliot and ... Ok, yea, I'm addicted. ;)
person Kat
schedule July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It's a good thing I'm not the one with the killer instinct. There'd be one HUGE-ass pile of bodies by now if I killed everyone who looked at you."
"Nah, pet... th' only reason anyone looks at me ta begin with is ta see who th' lucky bloke that got you is."
I can just see that argument "No, you're prettier." "No way, pet. You're far more gorgeous" "What, are you nuts?! You're beautiful!" etc, etc. *laughs*

Harris turned away from 'home, the place' as well as 'home, the vampire'
Oh wow... that's a hell of a blow up!!!

Angst and a hell of a wrenching scene!

Evil thing you!

Kat
person banner
schedule July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just found this series last night - and I've spent all this time catching up! Wonderful stories. l love the characters, the plot, the sex (a lot!) and especially the interconnecting threads.
It's interesting that Hypatia's 'brothers' didn't realize that what they were doing was rape. Or maybe they do, and the 'soul' discussion was intended as a distraction...

One polite request (only if you like fan suggestions, ok?) More BD and D/s. I'm kinky that way.
person RemityGirl
schedule July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Tis...You're so much like Joss and Company with the "they've been happy for too long...let's add some angst!" that I sometimes want to scream!! That's a compliment!! Why do you think Buffy and Angel were so popular and live on way after their shows demise. Through wonderful authors like you!! Thanks for another chapter. BUT, we need more..soon?? =-) Thanks!