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for Recreation and Renovation

by JLH

person TheShadowCat
schedule September 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
And if the arrival of a Slayer doesn't clear that castle of nearly every vampire, I don't know what will. Great chapter, update soon please.
person Susan
schedule September 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Bravo! a WONDERFUL STORY!!!! Can't wait for updates! The politics.. the love story.. Ah, food for my addiction. :) Thank you. :)

My apologies for being absent for so long, just catching up with things after Katrina. Everything's fine, my family's all together and we have everything we need. The only thing I jonesed for was my addiction fodder. ;) Thanks again! Can't wait for further updates!
person TheShadowCat
schedule September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, you haven't forgotten this story. Good. Now please hurry with the next chapter.
person TheShadowCat
schedule September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOO HOO! Go Xander! a little confused about the year seven math test, did you mean grade seven? Other than that, great chapter. Update soon please.
person TheShadowCat
schedule September 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I go off on vacation and you, you sneeky person you, go and write up 4 more chapters. And good ones I might add. Keep it coming.
person Susan
schedule August 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*is bouncing!* YAY! Finally they get to the meat and bones of this.. can't -wait- for more! Anton is -so- cool! :) Thank you!
person RemityGirl
schedule August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh Josie, Honey... I'm sorry you felt like you had to rant...but even more distressed that someone hurt you...and as a novice writer. How awful....Spike should eat them and not let them enjoy it!!! I love your stories!! As do many others. *pets and strokes all YOUR SPANDER goodness* I know I don't give FB on every chapter...but I will try to do better. :) This is one of my VERY favorite series. I love that you keep writing in the same 'verse we're all so familiar with and adore. It brings so much more depth and passion to the characters. I actually feel like these are my friends...going through difficult times. Your writing brings me sooo much happiness, pleasure and delight!!! You're a great story teller!! I see your words in my mind like a movie or a play. I feel the richness of the fabrics and the locales when you descibe them. YOU ARE WONDERFUL!!!

Please don't let the stupidity of one person make you doubt your writing. AND PLEASE DON'T LET THEM STOP YOU FROM WRITING AND SHARING YOUR BRILLANT STORIES!!

BIG HUGS,
REMITYGIRL (TRACY :)

person RemityGirl
schedule August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Also....loved this new bit. Anton needs family and so do our boys!! The castle feels extraordinary!! You give great visuals...hehe!

I was away for an extended weekend and came back to so many new chapters.....I nearly passed out from the exhilaration. WEEEE!!!!

As always, thank you for your wonderful stories. Never fear....we're addicted to this 'verse. Thanks for sharing!!
person Susan
schedule August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Bravo!!! A lovely chapter and one I thoroughly enjoyed. Poor Anton, so long alone... but now he has Spike and Xander and it'll be alright. Can't -wait- to see what the challenges are!!!


As for the 'flamer', forget about it. It is -NOT- needy, nor is it childish, to ask for reviews. You're not telling people what to say about your work, or begging. Asking is just that. People are free to refuse. That person is being ridiculous and petty, and is possibly jealous of your talent. I haven't seen one bad review of your work. How could there be? It's wonderful! I've enjoyed every bit of it and eagerly look forward to more! :) So, don't let him or her get you down.

And by all means, KEEP WRITING! Addict here, I need my fix! ;)
person falcon
schedule August 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic chapter! You've done a bit of history work aparantly, or you have a pretty thorough imagination *G*. I was impressed with the detail of the layout of the thirteen districts and how the Aurelius line had aquired them. Keep going!