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for Recreation and Renovation

by JLH

person JTMonk
schedule August 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have recently become addicted to reading these stories, and time again, I find myself reading your work. I sit for hours and read these carefully thought out stories, with all the intricate plot lines and in depth character involvements. I must say, I never thought I would be spending hour after hour reading novella on the internet. Its thoroughly engrossing, much to the distress and boredom of my partner. Your style of writing suggests a well educated yet imaginative individual, and I would like to ask, where exactly do you get some of your elaborate ideas from?

JT
schedule March 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
One small critique in an otherwise wonderful series. Love it, by the way.

Anton's sexual beginnings:
Pederasty would have meant that he'd have had a formally constructed relationship with an older man beginning around the age of 14, destined to become platonic on his entrance into manhood and his access to the rights and responsibilities of a citizen.

He would have had this in place and likely wouldn't have been with his aunt as his teacher in these things was usually male.

I have some stuff on the erastes/eromenos relationship tucked away from college if you're interested?
person TheShadowCat
schedule February 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very, very nice. I can't wait for the next story to start.
person Littlest Coyote
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wee!! New stuff! Good to see our dynamic duo winning and the bad guys getting what they deserve. Tell me there's more? Want to see Giles get all better and find out how things sort out now that the asshats aren't running the Watchers.
person TheShadowCat
schedule January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very nice. Hope there's more to come (or cum as the case may be).
person TheShadowCat
schedule January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great update! Can't wait for the show down. Hurry with the next one please.
person Littlest Coyote
schedule January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is working up into quite the epic. I'm impressed and definitly looking forward to how you bring it all together.
person TheShadowCat
schedule January 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very nice chapter with a little smut added in. Smut is always good. *smile* Keep up the great work and update soon please.
person TheShadowCat
schedule January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, nonononononono! NO! You may not kill of Giles. If you do I'll cry all over my keyboard and that'll ruin it and then I'll have to get a new keyboard and hubby will have a fit and it will be your entire fault! Do you want that on your head? Hmm? Do you? I thought not. Now, hurry with the next chapter please.
person TheShadowCat
schedule January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very nice. Hope you can update sooner than this last time.