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for Slave

by waterlilyxx9

schedule October 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
More please! Very good, I would love to read another chapter!
person MarzBar
schedule June 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yummy, smut and bloodplay. Will we get more POV from Spike? Is Willow's blood special because she's a witch? More please.
person laura
schedule June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love spike! and I love willow! let's have more luvin! ty for writing, look forward to your next chapter
person Confused_Muse
schedule June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful idea, and for my tuppence you've very much captured the character of Spike pre-chip. Not convinced you've managed to do the same with Willow, especially not in the first chapter (she's so shy before her relationship with Tara becomes full-on, I can't imagine hearing her saying "cunt" let alone thinking it to herself!) You've got her being shy with Spike, but open with herself, and personally I think she'd be more embarrassed/horrified/in denial than you're portraying her.

Still only my tuppence, as I say, and well, I'll certainly be back to see just how depraved Spike gets :)
person MarzBar
schedule June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hot, hot smut!! What does Spike have in mind for Willow, other than the obvious? More soon please.

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