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for Vampire Journal

by Beodel

person Ephiany
schedule April 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Beodel will write more when he returns home. He has been called to fight for his country. He is in the Navy and doing very well! I do not know when he will be returning home but I hope soon.
ESA
person The Vampire Raven
schedule July 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Cool story, not a lot out there about the other side. Looking forward to more. Oh, and congratulations on becoming a father, I wish your daughter well.
person MarzBar
schedule July 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Glad to see this journal back. A practical vampire; no soul, no love, no poetry, etc. Funny, too. More please.
person MarzBar
schedule June 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Loving your vampire. More please.
person Amy
schedule June 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whew, am I glad he didn't hurt Willow. And the more I read about this guy, the funnier he is! Can;t wait for more!!
person MarzBar
schedule June 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am glad you are enjoying this because it is showing. I love this story! This guy is funny, snarky, arrogant and smart. More soon please.
person Beodel
schedule June 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You ask for a name, maybe you'll get one. I sort of like the John Q. Everyvamp style this guy has going on. {note, John Q. Everyvamp is NOT his name}
person MarzBar
schedule June 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
GADZ! Nice violence! I have to wonder how many of us could actually refrain from killing all or most of our familiies if we were vampires. More please.
person MarzBar
schedule June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This vampire is funny! Lucky for us he keeps talking to you. Will we ever get a name? Will he meet some of those we already know (not in the Biblical sense unfortunately)?
person MarzBar
schedule June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is good. More please.