rate_review Reviews

First fanfic? WOW! You're first is better than most I've read. Please continue writing. Love the title, although I was expecting something a little more playful from it. But, this was excellent. I look forward to reading your next.

I had a rotten day with traffic today. Please send Spike now!

I loved this little story! I hope that there is more to it, cuz it really seems like the first chapter of an amazing story. An even if it's just a little ficlet, it's a great ficlet. I needed that today, thank you! Please keep writting. :)

Pretty damn good for the first try. Very hot, sexy and fun to read. My only critiques are that the characterization was slightly off and the emotional stuff could be balanced a little better with the sexual stuff so that it doesn't take you out of the mood. Sometimes the changes were very abrupt. Overall, very enjoyable - great job. :)

Very nice bit of work. Thank you for sharing. I hope you're planning on writing more.

that was really good. you are a lot better than some of the other PWP writers around here. you really get into the emotions and descriptions. please keep writing.