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June 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well that was short and to the point, i dont like to flame anyone, because its not nice, but you do need to work on your story structure and sentences and plot, take some time out to develop your story and get a good beta
Angela
Angela
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June 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
no
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June 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Are you serious? God, please, no more!