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ummmmmmmmmmmmm

Please don't continue this crap

Holly shit that sucked. Sorry but it did. Have u ever heard of suspense and detailing? U could turned those lines into a full blasted couple of pages. Well good luck with anything else u do. *Peace*Love*Happiness*

wow its very different, you kinda did a reverse, only a little harsher

Oh no, Spike would never abuse Buffy, and Buffy would never act submissive as a way to avoid taking any responsibility. (Balcony sex, anyone?) BwaHahahahaaaaaaaaa Some people are picking on you for the wrong reasons. Stick to the ones that criticize you for your lacking in the area of grammar and plot. And for your own sake, please heed their advice. It says in your profile you like to have sex a lot, if you're old enough to do it, then you should have some idea how to write about it. Have a nice day. And don't let this get you down too much. It's not the end of the world that you're not the next Herself_NYC in Spuffydom..

I don't want to be cruel here. It's hard to be a first time writer, I sympathize. And it was brave to try it. But I will say that it HURT me to see characters that I have such deep affection for treated so cruelly. For the hardcore fans, these are 'people' we care about and know well. Have you ever even SEEN the show?? Buffy and Spike would never, ever interact that way. And I'm all for smut and fantasy but there needs to be some reason behind such drastic behavior changes for the characters. If you want to continue this fic, please consider making some changes. Best of Luck.

crap!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I loved this little story! I hope that there is more to it, cuz it really seems like the first chapter of an amazing story. An even if it's just a little ficlet, it's a great ficlet. I needed that today, thank you! Please keep writting. :)

My bad, I clicked on the wrong story....disregaurd my previous comment.

I've read the other reviews, and while I know its their own opinion, I think some of them were really harsh. If you wrote this just for kicks, than good for you. If you were serious, then ok, :) I think you should continue writing if you want to, regardless of what anybody says. That is all, :)