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April 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Love Spike biting! AND then Spike biting back? Oh, yeah! I don't usually, well ever, put Spike with Buffy, but you can, AND you pull it off! Good job! -Shayne
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October 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
For your first fic, that was amazing!
Well done really.
Love the fact that buffy said
"She feels it."
So we know she des love him.
Made my day =D
Well done really.
Love the fact that buffy said
"She feels it."
So we know she des love him.
Made my day =D
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October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very cute. keep up the good work.
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October 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It's a bit of a jump that season 5 Buffy would be into Spike that way, so you might want to say it's a bit AU. Or give it some build up and backstory so we can understand why Buffy is coming on to Spike, then deciding she loves him so quickly. Or at the very least, give some kind of author's note like 'this is what would happen if Buffy were nicer to Spike and had hidden feelings for him'. It doesn't really fit in characterization-wise into season 5, pre-Crush; but you could make it work if you give a bit of a preface.
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June 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you did a great job with this.
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June 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was really good for a first fic. I look forward to any other Buffy fics you decide to do.
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June 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is a great job for someone who has never written smut before. i hope to see more from you.