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February 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
There's some OOC-ness going on, for starters.. Buffy wouldn't use the word distress in that sense.
Also, the spelling and sentence structure needs some work
Also, the spelling and sentence structure needs some work
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August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
IM HOPEING FOR ANOTHER CHAPTER THAT ONE WAS JUST...YUMMY
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July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey girly i don't care what others say about the spacing or the lack of action. if they had thought about it f second it wold of been pretty clear that there was going to be more chapters... any way carry on the great work and i'll drop by now and the to see when you update.
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June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
u need some more action
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June 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey baby, been waitin so long for this, am proud of ya, keep it going! xxx
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June 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey hun, loved the fic and i can't wait to read more ;) keep up the yummy- droolyness
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June 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it-great start. I look forward to reading more...my only suggestion is to try using spaces, or papragraphs-it will make it easier to read.