schedule
June 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good beginning...i like the idea, it has great promise...but the chapter was too short...you need to beef it up a bit so we can have something to really chew on...lol
schedule
June 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OK, that's a first chapter tease. Liz Giles? More please.
schedule
June 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OK...first chapter was way too short...but you've got my interested...so I'm thinking you did your job! LOL Write more soon!