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by Janina

person ashliauna
schedule June 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Lovely..wonder what will be next? hehehe
person Brunettepet
schedule June 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good start. Buffy's enthusiasm was well realized without making her seem ditzy. She and William living in the "real world" is going to be fun. Buffy dating one of William's former tormentors has dramatic potential.
person Ashliauna
schedule June 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awww..your story is wonderful already.. you really are a talented writer and I can't wait until you update...but until then...wonderful writing to you
ash
person Aisling
schedule June 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i like very much in fact :D cya xx
person MarzBar
schedule June 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting start. Are you going to be able to turn William into Spike? More soon please.