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for Soul Mates

by Ravenhawk

person Roasty
schedule September 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Really enjoying the story, it's warm sweet and sexy. Who could ask for anything more?
person Anon
schedule September 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yay more please
person CPT Skip
schedule September 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I hope you continue to publish your story here as I really like it. It is seldom that I read a story that is both erotic and sweet, but your story is both. You also present all three characters reacting in ways that, if this story actually happened on the show, I think are very close to canon. At least I can see all three planely in my minds eye. Your dialog is excellent and always in character. All in all, this is one of my favorite erotic fanfic stories.
person TheShadowCat
schedule September 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ok, I hear you about the lack of reviews. I wrote over 20 chapters on my story and got all of 6 reviews. I swear, people must think that it'll kill them to leave a review. Very frustrating I know.

That said, I would like to make a suggestion. When writing your sex scenes, get out the Ken and Barbie dolls please. As hot as your sex scenes are, they're a little hard to believe unless these people are REALLY flexable. And remember where you placed them please. One second Xander is leaning against the pillows and the next he's lying flat on his back.

But at any rate, please update soon.
person MYLADYMYSTERE
schedule July 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i often don't read Buffy stories because there are so many and after awhile they all start sounding alike. i have never read this pairing or thought of it but it was GREAT!!! it's a pairing that makes sense and Xander really deserves a solid loving realationship. thanks so much for writing this i enjoyed it alot
schedule June 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice fic, enjoyable sex and some lovely interplay between 3 of my favourite characters. personally I was always a Xillow shipper but I never thought that meant Tara was out of the picture, keep writing, nice to see a buffy fic still so popular over 2 years after the show finished (going to meet Charisma Carpenter this weekend!), may it go from strength to strength
schedule June 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was the first adult fic I read in which Tara wasn?t completely OOC. You?ve done a great job in matching the characters? personalities to what they did. It was a pleasure to read it.
person SteveUk1
schedule June 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story thx for posting it of the few W/T/male characters its always W/T/S or W/T/G I may be british but Spike always has been a bit of a ponce and im not 40+ so i dont identify with Giles much.

your adoring fan Steve
person CPT Skip
schedule June 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your story is both delightful and darn sexy. You've done an outstanding job with all three characters' personalities and they seem to be reacting in a manner that isn't too far out of cannon. I see just how they would come to this threesome without magical intervention or PWP forcing. I hope you continue this story as I find it quite entertaining and erotic. More, please?
person Janessa Ravenwood
schedule June 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Rather interesting concept and they seem rather in character as well. I look forward to reading more! Please continue.